The moon...(55 words)
Thursday, September 20, 2007 by hope
Golden warm rays kissed her face.. as he was happy to see her sleeping quietly.. many teary nights they spent together.. his heart ached whenever he saw tears in her eyes.. today he is similing.. suddenly he saw silent tears hugging pillow.. he lost himself in dark clouds again.. raindrops kissed her window pane..
Song of the moment... O raat ke musafir chanda zara bata de.. mera kasoor kya hai.. tu faisla suna de..
beautiful song.. Enjoy!! *smiles*
Song of the moment... O raat ke musafir chanda zara bata de.. mera kasoor kya hai.. tu faisla suna de..
beautiful song.. Enjoy!! *smiles*
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Wow!! Another addition to 55 word story-tag. I wrote two of these but this one is beautiful. Loved the way you ended the story, in a bit of mystery. Loved it!!
Lovely song to end the post like always :-)
Thankyou Champ and yes! you are tagged for one more again :D
you have awesome sense of music..fida ho gaye aapke gaane pe!
aaha ! what a lovely post...only 55 words contains a lotta of feelings...:)
"his heart ached whenever he saw tears in her eyes"....ye line kabhi na bhool paunga....
hmm...fir chaand ki kashti mein raat khepi unhone..phir khud ka dariya dobara paar kiya uhone..!
jyoti Thankyou..
deepak Thanks *smiles*
anirudh aahaa!! *smiles*
nice song...budy
@deepak: i think i can understand why you pointed out "tears in her eyes"! really?
@jyoti:-
Actually!! I don’t know.. What r u thinking...
“aankhein kisi ki ho, un main to bas sapne hi achche lagte hain…. Aanshu to un sapno ko dho deta hai….”
Thats why I hate tears!!!……
BTW let me know, what u think……but not in public forum….by mail…..:D