Ghoonghat...
Sunday, December 16, 2007 by hope
Ghoonghat ke bahane se..
chup kar zamane se..
thoda sharma rahi thi..
thoda itra rahi thi..
matwali hawa jaise..
prem geet gungunaa rahi thi..
Ghoonghat mei..
chand sa roop chupaye..
dil mei armaano ke deep jalaye..
apni aankhen meeche..
ghoonghat ke peeche..
sapne sajaa rahi thi..
Nazrein jo piya ne usse milayi..
dhadkan kuch ladkhadai..
ghoonghat saraka uska..
chehre pe laali chayi..
thoda phir ghabra kar..
seene mei uske chehra chupaakar..
boli ghoonghat se..
kyo tune meri laaj gavayi..
Muskurata ghoonghat bola..
kyo laal hui jati hai..
ab to yahi..
tere har pal ka saathi hai..
na sata ab usko..
mujh ghoonghat ke bahane se..
oad le use ko..
aur jod le rishta us deevane se..
Song of the moment: Ghoonghat ki aad se dilbar ka deedar adhoora rehta hai.. jab tak na pade aashiq ki nazar.. shrangaar adhoora rehta hai.. *smiles*
chup kar zamane se..
thoda sharma rahi thi..
thoda itra rahi thi..
matwali hawa jaise..
prem geet gungunaa rahi thi..
Ghoonghat mei..
chand sa roop chupaye..
dil mei armaano ke deep jalaye..
apni aankhen meeche..
ghoonghat ke peeche..
sapne sajaa rahi thi..
Nazrein jo piya ne usse milayi..
dhadkan kuch ladkhadai..
ghoonghat saraka uska..
chehre pe laali chayi..
thoda phir ghabra kar..
seene mei uske chehra chupaakar..
boli ghoonghat se..
kyo tune meri laaj gavayi..
Muskurata ghoonghat bola..
kyo laal hui jati hai..
ab to yahi..
tere har pal ka saathi hai..
na sata ab usko..
mujh ghoonghat ke bahane se..
oad le use ko..
aur jod le rishta us deevane se..
Song of the moment: Ghoonghat ki aad se dilbar ka deedar adhoora rehta hai.. jab tak na pade aashiq ki nazar.. shrangaar adhoora rehta hai.. *smiles*
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oohh..ghoonghat? hmm hope can write lines on anyhting haa? err i hope it isnt any song from a movie?? :O
wonderful poem
This is my favorite poem of yours :-)
Bahut hee pyari kavita hain, thodi se natkhat se, thodi se sharmele se...
And this is one of my favorite Juhi Chawla song :D
lovely poem.... :)
Good one!! :)
itni sundar hai...biklul nayi dulhan ki tarah
well, My hindi is really bad! :D
I didnt understand this!
nice blog u've got here!
do u write on hindi poetry?
-Jeevy
Nice to see some modification in the original one.....now its flowing and nicely phrased....
Inspiration u got from my poem...that I got it
.....but I cannot see that I have done some edition in "this" particular version...so I don't think that i am the guest editor...but neways thanks... :)
bye n tc