Aansoo...

Sunday, January 13, 2008 by hope

Kisi ke liye moti..
kisi ke liye paani..
aansoo teri ajab kahani..

Koi kahe khushi mei ro diye..
koi samjhe gham mei barsa liye..
sachchayi iski kisi ne na jaani..
aansoo teri ajab kahani..

Kabhi machal aaye..
zara se baat par..
kabhi na chalak paye..
zindagi ki bhi haar par..
bada hai ye abhimaani..
aansoo teri ajab kahani..

Tanhayi mei saath nibhaye..
mehfil mei bhi na sharmaye..
karta hai apni zid manmaani..
aansoo teri ajab kahani..

Kabhi aankhon mei chamke..
asha ki kiran banke..
kabhi galo ko choome..
pyaar bhari yaad banke..
karta hai ye sab shaitaani..
aansoo teri ajab kahani..



Song of the moment: Do naina aur ek kahani.. thoda sa badal.. thoda sa paani.. aur ek kahani.. *smiles*
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10 comments:

    On January 13, 2008 at 11:23 PM Ashish Soni said...

    Very nice... :)

    On January 13, 2008 at 11:29 PM Ashish Soni said...

    You won't believe it really
    In morning while coming for office i was thinking to write a poem on aansoo..I recalled one of my old poems related to aansoon..
    Four Tears

    I must say you read my mind.....though the subject would have been different...but would have been a little better... :P :P
    "jez kidding" :P :P

    but now i guess if i try writing a poem on this topic it will imitate some of your lines or feelings.... so i'll postpone it..

    On January 14, 2008 at 1:09 AM hope said...

    Yes, i read your "four tears" long back.. its beautiful and ofcourse i dont have any doubt that when you will scribble your thoughts on "aansoo" it'll be much better than this :) but thanks for appriciating this one too *smiles*

    On January 14, 2008 at 2:45 AM Lukkydivs said...

    wooow hope smiles writing about tears :P beautiful :)

    On January 14, 2008 at 3:09 AM dEEPs said...

    wah! wah !!
    sach main aansoo badi ajib hai... hasna,rona,khushi, gam hamesha apne saath.... jab apne chor ke jaye to bhi ..jab koi rootha aa jaye toh bhi aata.... es sachche saathi ki tarah.... :)

    lovely poem...:)

    On January 14, 2008 at 6:12 AM Sameera Ansari said...

    That was wonderful and so heartrending dear!Keep it up :)

    I had written a poem a while back on tears too :

    http://desiduck.blogspot.com/2007/10/tale-of-solitary-tear.html

    On January 14, 2008 at 11:39 AM Anirudh 'Lallan' Choudhry said...

    isko padhne ke baad na...

    aap hamare khyalon mein bahut famous ho gaye hain

    On January 14, 2008 at 8:10 PM Jyoti said...

    asoon to hote hai beh jaane ke liye par wajah de jaate hai..aap jaise ko kuch badhiya sa likh jaane ke liye...!!

    Beautiful poem!

    On January 14, 2008 at 10:57 PM hope said...

    Thankyou so much everyone.. *smiles*

    On January 15, 2008 at 2:41 AM Anonymous said...

    great one, m back!!!!!!

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