55 word (fiction)...

Monday, September 29, 2008 by hope

He accused her for keeping him awake late night.. but you are usually up till that time, she murmured with a deep sigh.. no I am not.. he said forcefully..

Through a slit of a closed window.. she was maintaining a log of every night.. but if only he knew it.. then wouldn't have lied..

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10 comments:

    On September 29, 2008 at 7:04 AM Jeeves said...

    Initially thought it was discussion between husband and wife. But then she wouldnt keep a log behind closed windows. Very intriguing. Like this.

    On September 29, 2008 at 8:21 AM rainboy said...

    nice..u writing a novel?

    On September 29, 2008 at 8:37 AM Sameera Ansari said...

    Some men think they can get away with it all!They should know we women are not so dumb :P

    On September 29, 2008 at 8:45 AM Lucifer said...

    interestin!!

    On September 29, 2008 at 5:27 PM fursat said...

    Return of the 55-word story...wow. Now you need to meet me and samjhofy the matlab of this ishtory :P

    On September 29, 2008 at 8:15 PM Anonymous said...

    Through a slit of a closed window.. she was maintaining a log of every night.. but if only he knew it.. then wouldn't have lied..

    donno wot 2 say....apart 4m sayin dat u write beautifully..

    On September 29, 2008 at 11:24 PM hope said...

    jeeves Thankyou.. :)

    vicky lolz rainboy..why do you think so :P

    sameera actually girl it's so easy to lie to the one who trusts your words :)

    mays aah!!

    ricky lolz champ..

    enchanted Thankyou *smiles*

    On September 29, 2008 at 11:48 PM rainboy said...

    it sounds like a para of one in the making.

    On September 30, 2008 at 4:06 AM Anks said...

    nice... the beauty of a 55er is the scope of interpretation... and this ones leaves a lot... :)

    On September 30, 2008 at 4:48 AM hope said...

    vicky aah!!

    anks Thank you girl.. :)

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