Commitment.. 55 fiction...

Thursday, October 2, 2008 by hope

Drenched in ecstasy they smiled.. he pushed her against the wall.. caressed her lightly as waiting to lose himself.. slowly leaned over her.. looked in her eyes.. and suddenly something broke inside.. a tear kissed her cheeks.. as she turned away and sighed..

Was still committed to the lover who cheated on her many times..


Posted in: , , | | |

10 comments:

    On October 2, 2008 at 7:21 AM Priya said...

    Thaz wat u call passion of love..

    On October 2, 2008 at 8:04 AM Adisha said...

    love : strong n blind !! :) Lovely ...

    On October 2, 2008 at 8:14 AM fursat said...

    This one I understood :P You seem to be on a 55-word roll :D

    On October 2, 2008 at 8:51 AM Lucifer said...

    how cud u say so much in jus 55 words??? wow!!!

    On October 2, 2008 at 8:54 AM rainboy said...

    she still loves that cheater..it's difficult to let go.
    FAlling in love is like heaven but falling in love with wrong person is like hell.

    On October 2, 2008 at 4:37 PM Sameera Ansari said...

    I agree with Priya.But she is being too kind on such a person.

    On October 2, 2008 at 9:36 PM Jeeves said...

    Beautiful

    On October 2, 2008 at 10:17 PM hope said...

    priya ye.. passion..

    adisha you got it right :)

    ricky thats why you are champ na :P yes! on roll :P

    mayz look who is saying this :P Thank you..

    vicky Love is love not wrong or right..

    sameera when you love with all you have.. it's just hard to break the spell.. no..??

    On October 2, 2008 at 10:52 PM fursat said...

    But I need a 550 word explanation of the last story :P

    On October 2, 2008 at 11:52 PM hope said...

    forget it.. few things are best the way they are.. :P

Post a Comment