Pause...

Sunday, November 7, 2010 by hope

No matter how fast you move ahead..

or how much time rolls by..

the moment you pause..

to catch a breath..

thinking came a long way..

in that very moment..

your mind runs back..

to the one your heart held..

makes you realise..

no matter how hard you try..

those who live within you..

can never be passed by..


OSI.. #Pause..

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8 comments:

    On November 8, 2010 at 8:54 AM Anonymous said...

    I like this very much - it's how you say, when you pause for a moment, the memory of those you've loved flood in. Well done.

    On November 8, 2010 at 10:24 AM Geraldine Helen said...

    This is a beautiful, heartfelt work...lovely!


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    On November 8, 2010 at 12:18 PM Reflections said...

    Stunning piece, heartfelt and sad missing those who were, yet still held within those precious moments of our hearts.

    Very well done.

    On November 8, 2010 at 6:11 PM The Write Girl said...

    We keep the memories of those we love deep in our hearts. This is lovely, sweet, and beautiful.

    On November 8, 2010 at 6:26 PM Teresa said...

    Very wonderful! You've certainly captured the reality of what pausing can do to our mind and allow all those memories rushing in.

    On November 8, 2010 at 6:44 PM Irie said...

    Thanks for stopping by. I really like this natural flow of your poem. Life's moments can pass us by so quickly if we don't stop to appreciate them. Very nicely written!

    On November 9, 2010 at 3:32 AM Ramesh Sood said...

    THIS IS BEAUTIFULL..AND HOW CAN YOU? HA.. NOT TO THINK EVEN..

    On November 9, 2010 at 6:27 PM Harshad Mehta said...

    "those who live within you..

    can never be passed by.."


    So true. So well put in words.

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